4-80: Chapter 4 end
So, uh, that;s the end of the chapter.
At least the web version, as always the book will have an eight page epilogue.
I’m going to be taking some time off to finish the book and visit family. The comic will return in August at latest. Perhaps sooner if I can manage.
In the mean time you can check out my other webcomic Sin Pararse, which will continue to update every friday, my Tumblr which has personal blogging and sketches and things, and maybe check out my Patreon? Donating two dollars a month will get you access to a special adults-only side comic. The more people who back the Patreon the more time I can dedicate to working on comics for you ghouls.
I love you all! <3
you could rename the page “maybe thing were never normal”
Since usually the alt text correspond to something said during the page
I am definitely a fan, but the pacing put me off, this chapter. Several of the scenes and much of the dialogue felt rushed, especially building up to climax. Maybe try spacing things out a bit, and use panel changes to emphasize the flow and importance of what’s being said, rather than trying to finish a thought right away.
I appreciate the criticism and will take it into account in the future, but I\’m not going to go back and redraw the chapter.
welp, that’s certainly depressing.
The “He can’t call in sick on account of being a giant bug!” reminded me of Kafka’s Metamorphosis
Intentional?
Oh gee, I haven\’t read Metamorphosis since college. I wish it was intentional.