12- Am I loud enough?
These are so much faster to color than the CV pages, I guess just because they’re fewer panels or something.
Anyway now that Cynthia’s made her first appearance that’s the last of the four main characters. I’ve added a list of characters with profiles here. I’m gonna reorganize it and add Cynthia right after I post this.
PFFT HAHAHA
"I tried to burn her but she didn't catch on fire."
Heh, I was proud of that line :D
I don't get it. What's supposed to be happening in this comic? What is the girl supposed to be? Did you trace these characters off of a poorly drawn dollar store comic book?
Hi.
I think a problem with your "art" is that it uses these hypersexualized animals in place of humans.
Personally, I find it gross, immoral, and a mockery of art and comics.
Um, what? There's one major 'animal' character, and she's still primarily human, much closer to an anime catgirl than anything furry. All the other characters are humans or elves. Unless you're counting the dog, who is a dog. And what do you think is hypersexualized about them?
I'm open to crit, but honestly you're not making any sense.
If you don't like it, why would you read all the way up to page 12? Seems a bit nonsensical to me…
@Thomas
I, officially, have lost faith in humanity. Twice.
What a party pooper >:(
This is most likely the absolute worst comic I have ever read in my entire life. I am ashamed that the human race produced someone who is truly this terrible at drawing comics.
Well, I'm sorry you feel that way. But if this is seriously the worst thing you've ever seen, you need to get out more.
Dont listen to that troll,he’s just jelous that he can’t produce beautiful pieces of art like you do :)
Thanks. I'm not really sure what happened here, since three trolls (or one troll with several proxies) all showed up at once and left nasty comments on one page and then never returned, as far as I can tell.
Apparently I pushed someone's 'attack the furry' button, which is ironic since I'm not a furry.
Let’s see you do better. I can name plenty of PUBLISHED comics that I don’t consider as good as these.
I'm sorry, but there are things out there that are much, much, worse.
Plus, if you think there is something wrong, critique! Don't just say UR COMIC IS CRAP and expect the author to fix it on their own.
C'mon, really? Why would you say that to any other human being. You didn't have to post that if you didn't really like it. Just don't read it anymore. and like Momowoo said, say what the author can improve on. Don't just say "This is the worst comic I have seen in my life."
Tail ribbon FTW! You make really brilliant comics, I hope one day to be half as good as this :D
I'm probably not the first to say this (b/c I'm too lazy to scroll through all the comments), but the little bell collar and ribbon on the tail that Cynthia has affected is just precious … :-)
Tardy to the party, I know, but my eye for detail (don’t say anything about this) picked up that Cynthia’s breast in panel four just looks like it’s Cynthia’s armpit. Whether or not this comment gets a reply, I don’t care, but I know that Kytri doesn’t get many chances to draw women in just a bra and skirt from the side too often, so of course it won’t look the best, and don’t hate me and call me a perv due to my eye for detail, it’s a gift and a curse.
Looking at the page again, I can sort of see what you\’re saying. That said, I don\’t think it looks all that bad, and it\’s a little late to change it now.
Of course, but it was just an observation I made and I thank you for taking the time to respond to a dedicated 14 male reader who feels terribly out of place (especially with my previous comment refering to a cat-woman’s breast) but still enjoys the multiple comic series that you have come out with (I first started reading “The Rift” about when it was 3/4 or so done) whilst feeling like a lonely island amongst a sea of fan-girls.
(wrote that in a very calm matter while trying to not think about the honor of Kytri responding to me •o• )
Why are there so many trolls on this page? Holy cheese…
Welp, I’ll just say that this comic is amazing so far! I like the world and the characters are fun!